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Oh, yes, thats SEXY.
I beg your pardon?
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Don't love me because I'm beautiful. Don't hate me because I'm not.
Doubt my love and you doubt me.
she smiled and saw his face once more,
her son, taken all too soon,
with hunger, no water,
no vision left,
no future, no past
she stretched out her hand,
and they took flight,
to another land,
where pain and fear cannot fight
their war,
where there is food and wounds are not sore
where the people know,
how not to fight war.
And she smiled,
her face at eternal peace,
as once more her son
is cradled in her arms.
A small cross to remember them both.
Can you say the same?
Is your face at peace,
or deep down do you
feel a great unease?
I know that I do!
wrapped up in a box,
encrusted with diamonds
and filled with lust,
words that will hold
you all loving and tight,
like a warm duvet, somewhere to hide
Read it, as it hugs you with all its might !
With ribbons golden and bows so sweet,
these words are delicious and are there to eat.
Savour them slowly under your tongue,
like the nightingale shares out its
its beautiful song,
of loving and sharing for ever and a day,
feeling safe and now wanting to stay.
Words that keeping echoing into the night,
Now lets both turn over and switch off the light
Good nite.
I love you.
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I see love in Your coffee.
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I love to say fuck. Fuck, fuck, fuckity, fuck.