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ATTENTION ALL WATCHERS

Sun Feb 6, 2005, 1:33 PM
If you watch this account, take heed - please stop watching it within the next 2 weeks (that'll give everyone time) unless you want your writing critiqued!

After two weeks, those still watching will be sent a note asking if they wish to be critiqued, just to make sure.

Thanks for your co-operation!

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:iconsto67:
i will submit my devID by the end of the week ^^"
soz for the delay guys
:iconrubycored:
i'm not too good with poetry :(

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:iconglorgindel:
heeeeey, why am i in the pending members list?! :tears:

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:icondreamgoddess:
You most not have sent us a note telling us you wanted to stay...do that and then email your ID as soon as you can!

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Don't love me because I'm beautiful. Don't hate me because I'm not.

Doubt my love and you doubt me.
:iconyukin:
If you want PoeticDesire to comment to your work, stop posting it as a devious comment, but rather a note.
:icondutchshun:
As slowly she drew her final breath,
she smiled and saw his face once more,
her son, taken all too soon,
with hunger, no water,
no vision left,
no future, no past
she stretched out her hand,
and they took flight,
to another land,
where pain and fear cannot fight
their war,
where there is food and wounds are not sore
where the people know,
how not to fight war.

And she smiled,
her face at eternal peace,
as once more her son
is cradled in her arms.
A small cross to remember them both.

Can you say the same?
Is your face at peace,
or deep down do you
feel a great unease?
I know that I do!
:icondutchshun:
I give you this poem,
wrapped up in a box,
encrusted with diamonds
and filled with lust,
words that will hold
you all loving and tight,
like a warm duvet, somewhere to hide
Read it, as it hugs you with all its might !
With ribbons golden and bows so sweet,
these words are delicious and are there to eat.
Savour them slowly under your tongue,
like the nightingale shares out its
its beautiful song,
of loving and sharing for ever and a day,
feeling safe and now wanting to stay.
Words that keeping echoing into the night,
Now lets both turn over and switch off the light
Good nite.
I love you.


if you like my work then visit [link] and click on dutchshun thats me.
:iconwinternity:
HEY... sorry i havent been on the copmputer... OHH!!! ill be posting more stuff soon!!!!! sorry about the pending!!!!

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I see love in Your coffee.
:iconpsyko-slasher:
Thanx for the friendship Im going to return the favor now.

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