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ATTENTION ALL WATCHERS

Sun Feb 6, 2005, 1:33 PM
If you watch this account, take heed - please stop watching it within the next 2 weeks (that'll give everyone time) unless you want your writing critiqued!

After two weeks, those still watching will be sent a note asking if they wish to be critiqued, just to make sure.

Thanks for your co-operation!

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~PoeticDesire Nov 24, 2004, 10:34:55 AM
And a full page of people who submitted poetry today is complete.

Expect this once a week.

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~yukin Nov 23, 2004, 6:28:12 PM
is a Community Whore
is a deviant since Aug 8, 2004, 5:32 PM
has 1,600 pageviews

Now show me where this is going.
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~the-hyrax-lord Nov 22, 2004, 8:54:47 AM
...thanks for the devwatch

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~xenrianume Nov 18, 2004, 12:48:13 PM
gaah...what a shame that the group died out :cry:

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~PoeticDesire Nov 19, 2004, 3:21:35 AM
No one was replying/acknowledging they still wanted to be a part. You are actually the 2nd person to reply to the journal. Oh well I suppose.

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~xenrianume Nov 19, 2004, 8:52:52 PM
maybe try re-starting the group one day...

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~fudge-browniez Nov 8, 2004, 10:23:13 AM
I have a poem called 'Why'

My baby needs to eat
so I'm hustlin'
I need to go to school
so I'm strippin'
I need to calm the stress
so I'm smokin'
I'm feelin' real depressed
so I'm drinkin'
I need to pay the rent
so I'm hookin'
I don't have a job
so I'm stealin'
My life is gettin' crazy
so I'm trippin'
I really wanna die
but I'm livin'
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~Rikku-Sphere-Hunter Oct 29, 2004, 2:24:47 PM
i have a poem

Spirt
by:kitten

I am nothing but a spirt...

never to return...

never to heal...

never to revel...

never to say...

or live another day...
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~PoeticDesire Oct 30, 2004, 10:31:29 PM
This is a collaboration club, not one giving critiques (at least not yet).

The usage of 'never to' doesn't do it for me, and I can't sense any imagery coming from this poem. Before writing, you should plan out the direction you plan to take, and even if you are writing to portray some sense of imagery, 'show, don't tell'.

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~Winternity Sep 7, 2004, 3:06:21 PM
hey guys.. ive finally submitted a piece of poetry.. YAY!!! so check it out yah?? finally gotten sum time to relax and write *phew*.

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